AWSOMENESS DRIPPING OVER THE EPICNESS!!! MAH BOI!!!
Seriously, very good, this is a masterpiece!
It has some really nice animations, if you make a short movie of this, with one "hero" character and a story along with it. It will defenitily turn out great.
Dont give up, youve got some talent right there.
Thank you for the crtique! A lot of these are very old and I got tired of loading documents to show people. I will definitely work on a more plot oriented battle.
I have some advice....
This isnt really fun, its boring after 10 secs. If you play this game and dont yawn after 5 minutes, u deserve a medal.
But im not here to complain, im here to help;
- The collors of missile may seem as some change or as a challenge, it isnt any of it. Try to make different enemies with their own weapon.
- Its way too simple, just press a few buttons and youll make it. Different enemies and increasingly more enemies will solve this.
- Also, when u die, u dont die. U will get a minus score, major bug. Since its like 50% of the whole game because the game is 2 parts: dodging missiles and dieing. Wich bings me to the following point.
- What u said about powerups and new missiles, please make it. It will extend the playability of the game and make it less repetitve. Some upgrades might help too.
I hope u'll think about remaking this. I did my best too help.
O, and it may not seem like it since i gave u a bad score, but respect for u for making this. I know i cant do this, i wish i could.
Sometimes I can be a perfectionist myself, so I understand. I dont think you should stop with this at all, you definately have my support if you want to keep perfecting this song . It keeps getting better everytime I hear it!
By the way, I think the "average listener" sometimes doesnt know anything about music. To be honest, I dont think many listeners care about quality whatsoever. I've heard people say some songs are "the best they ever heard" and those song cant even come close to this one quality-wise.
My advice; if people love what you do they will support you. The people who dont support you, screw them. All in all, just keep doing what you love to do, after all, art is a form of expression, it cant adapt to what the "average listener" wants.
Anyway, Im loving the song, once again. It was amazing the first time Ive heard this, and it keeps getting better.
thanks man. little hope here.
to be honest, i do not care all that much about people supporting or what so ever.
i only care about what i love to do and what not. its more of a +++ for me if people actually like what i do.
i have other plans aswell with this song. but cant publish anything as of now.
Kick is okay, I like longer hardstyle kicks, but this ones alright. I dunno if you pitch your kick sample? It sounds like you dont. Try pitching it and set it on monophonic, that way your kick will have the same punch on different notes. Sorry, Im bad at explaining stuff xD
Btw, I like the progression of the melody, but I think it would sound better if you would up the frequency on your lead sound.
Anyway, hope this helps!
- Damian Fisher
I love the stuff you came up with, that bass part after the melodie is awesome, and those plucks are great as well.
I cant really help you further, I kinda used all my ideas for this already, haha. But I like how you put your own style into this. So far so good I'd say.
thanks Damian :)
np i have allot of ideas MORE to come.
i worked all night trough and im still awake.
besides remixing isnt about changing a song to a different song.
its about keeping it original and still put your own toughts and things in it.
allot of people mostly judge it the other way around..
so this is a lesson to all of those people xD
I always loved all the vault boy pictures. Most genius character ever created!
Really detailed for a sketch! Beautiful!
Awesome, Awesome, Awesome :)
Thanks, Drag I appreciate that compliment. :)
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